tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post3455601851331390005..comments2009-05-05T08:21:19.123-04:00okieinthecityhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04102377939595252152noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post-59762994930651406662009-05-05T08:21:00.000-04:002009-05-05T08:21:00.000-04:00Fucking beautiful.little miss gnomidehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02711780440381336896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post-55037368456906759542009-05-02T18:41:00.000-04:002009-05-02T18:41:00.000-04:00All the images here have emotional weight,--each one becoming a metaphor for the next--and flow nicely toward an honest conclusion. This poem makes me deal with complex emotions, and I grateful for itSteven Leyvahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13131665082370821697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post-47634994617398511952009-05-02T08:58:00.000-04:002009-05-02T08:58:00.000-04:00Honesty in all things breeds credibility and casts an almost more than real reflection. I would have appreciated a little foreshadowing before I was thrust into some of the scenes, but ah well.Sundancehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18289108920239970004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post-80231498719077503002009-05-01T11:12:00.000-04:002009-05-01T11:12:00.000-04:00This is beautiful and heartwrenching. I love that you intertwined other lovers into your own narrative. You take the reader to the very edges of either end of an emotional spectrum. Well done.Lizziehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14787351164296766818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9682791.post-5579647656286205702009-05-01T10:07:00.000-04:002009-05-01T10:07:00.000-04:00this is incredible.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com