This was so fun to edit! Well done, you. The illustrations, the poem, the reading...you made it all.
Dude, so much cooler with the animations. Loved it.
Your illustrations are so good! They added an element of hilarity to those nuggets of wisdom. Did you have them at the reading? p.s. Really, SUCH GOOD pictures. I love your drawing style, it's so...I don't know...thurber-esque, but with more flair.