Monday, September 14, 2009

Walking Stiff Blues #3

(criteria of WSB)

duck swims toward swan.
duck swims away.
who knew swans could hiss?


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5 comments:

  1. DaniSeptember 15, 2009 at 6:14 AM

    ha! I like these little ditties.

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  2. little miss gnomideSeptember 15, 2009 at 9:06 AM

    Say that three times fast. ;)

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  3. okieinthecitySeptember 15, 2009 at 4:15 PM

    Thanks, guys.

    Yeah, it's hard to post unedited stuff. But I write a bunch of them in the hopes one will be decent. Plus it helps me stick a knife in my pigheaded inner editor.

    Thanks for reading/commenting.

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  4. yayaSeptember 22, 2009 at 8:15 PM

    I like this one the best. Do swans hiss?

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  5. okieinthecitySeptember 22, 2009 at 8:57 PM

    yaya, they definitely hiss.

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