Monday, September 14, 2009

Walking Stiff Blues #3

(criteria of WSB)

duck swims toward swan.
duck swims away.
who knew swans could hiss?


5 comments:

  1. ha! I like these little ditties.

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  2. Thanks, guys.

    Yeah, it's hard to post unedited stuff. But I write a bunch of them in the hopes one will be decent. Plus it helps me stick a knife in my pigheaded inner editor.

    Thanks for reading/commenting.

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  3. I like this one the best. Do swans hiss?

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