Monday, September 14, 2009

Walking Stiff Blues #3

(criteria of WSB)

duck swims toward swan.
duck swims away.
who knew swans could hiss?

5 comments:

Dani said...

ha! I like these little ditties.

little miss gnomide said...

Say that three times fast. ;)

okieinthecity said...

Thanks, guys.

Yeah, it's hard to post unedited stuff. But I write a bunch of them in the hopes one will be decent. Plus it helps me stick a knife in my pigheaded inner editor.

Thanks for reading/commenting.

yaya said...

I like this one the best. Do swans hiss?

okieinthecity said...

yaya, they definitely hiss.

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