I LOVE these. I totally feel like I'm there. I can FEEL it, smell it, see it. Your imagery is so...GRIPPING.I'm having problems using the word 'gripping' right now. I feel like that's such a cliched term. But I can't think of a better way to describe how your descriptions captivate an essence, so there you have it. You're GRIPPING.
Thank you. It's pretty cool how much brief images can portray. I'm constantly surprised by these spontaneious poems.