Saturday, September 12, 2009

Walking Stiff Blues #1


light reflects off wet pavement
E Village Saturday night
skinny kids and cigarettes


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6 comments:

  1. little miss gnomideSeptember 14, 2009 at 7:55 AM

    Kyle, you really have a way of placing your reader right in the moment that you're describing.

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  2. OkieSeptember 14, 2009 at 12:21 PM

    Thanks, little miss g. It's interesting how the repetition of an exercise develops a focus. I guess that's common street wisdom.

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  3. Ohmygoshko.comSeptember 15, 2009 at 9:39 AM

    Walking Stiff Blues rules! :)

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  4. okieinthecitySeptember 15, 2009 at 4:16 PM

    :D

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 23, 2009 at 7:07 PM

    I've been thoroughly enjoying the sights, sounds and experiences of the world you live in...very nice stuff...

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  6. okieinthecitySeptember 23, 2009 at 7:30 PM

    Paul, thanks for stopping by and thanks for the feedback.

    I was thinking about starting up an on going twitter with these poems, but not sure if I want to get sucked into that vortex.

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