Kyle, you really have a way of placing your reader right in the moment that you're describing.
Thanks, little miss g. It's interesting how the repetition of an exercise develops a focus. I guess that's common street wisdom.
Walking Stiff Blues rules! :)
I've been thoroughly enjoying the sights, sounds and experiences of the world you live in...very nice stuff...
Paul, thanks for stopping by and thanks for the feedback.I was thinking about starting up an on going twitter with these poems, but not sure if I want to get sucked into that vortex.