Yeeeeahhh.There you go.
Better than the previous draft. I like the movement and the hushed sounds.
I'm starting a bee hive.
F. Scott Fitzgerald would be flattered by your summary.On the other hand, I'm glad this is back. It brings to mind a subtle sweetness of nature and of sleep. A dormant holiness of flowers.
'lullaby of wings'--how do you DO it?