Monday, January 5, 2009

5.

Daisy remembers
pollen flight, cradled under
lullaby of wings


5 comments:

  1. Better than the previous draft. I like the movement and the hushed sounds.

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  2. F. Scott Fitzgerald would be flattered by your summary.

    On the other hand, I'm glad this is back. It brings to mind a subtle sweetness of nature and of sleep. A dormant holiness of flowers.

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  3. 'lullaby of wings'--how do you DO it?

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