Thursday, August 21, 2008

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If the last leaf falls
at dusk when I die, it all
goes down together.

4 comments:

  1. You've been doing well with the Haiku form. This one, and the one about your wife, are like a needle threaded with lightening--idea and image strike at the tiniest of spots.

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  2. Kyle, have you sent out your poetry to any contests or journals?

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  3. Yeah!

    damn.

    i agree with steven. and he's a poet, so he knows what he's talking about.

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