Tuesday, May 6, 2008

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Patter of wet feet
Over the bathroom tile. Smile.
Thinking of you nude.

7 comments:

  1. You mean she doesn't take a shower with her clothes on? Oh Les!!!!!

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  2. You are always able to say so much with so few words. this is beautiful.

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  3. Wow! You're wife must be pretty hot!

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  4. Thanks for the heads-up about Waits. Will surely see him. Meant to get my tickets yesterday, but I've been busy lately. Did manage to get ahold of Chuck Berry tickets, though.

    Still not writing. Little doses of Hemingway are bringing me back around a bit. Lost all my work, so I figure I can start clean soon. Yay etc.

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  5. I really love the roll of sounds on the tongue in this haiku. The sensory experiance is also exicting in three short lines.

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  6. Windows farted out on me and I hadn't backed up my writings (or recordings, for that matter). At this point, I just try and see it as a blessing.

    How're things for you?
    [and if you're much into jazz, I've some stuff that's hard not to like, if you're interested]

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